A New Scene for Thane and Gen!
For a little more closure... for a bit more character. I'm liking the scene... I'm wondering how to allude to it without giving anything away.
A quote maybe?:
“It’s good to see you awake.” A single nod, again. I keep my lips as terse as his. “You hear how we managed to get Lium out?” The corner of his lip rises. I raise my eyebrows and minutely shake “no”. “I guess we can tell you after… after I give you a bit of an update.” He pauses and glances back at his mask. Then he places it on the floor and cracks his knuckles.""
A quote maybe?:
"“Hi
Thane,” he mutters. He sits on the chair
at my bedside, keeps his back straight and holds the mask, running his fingers over
the dark plating. His eyes meet mine after
a second, once he realizes the only form of communication I possess is facial expressions.
I
nod.
“It’s good to see you awake.” A single nod, again. I keep my lips as terse as his. “You hear how we managed to get Lium out?” The corner of his lip rises. I raise my eyebrows and minutely shake “no”. “I guess we can tell you after… after I give you a bit of an update.” He pauses and glances back at his mask. Then he places it on the floor and cracks his knuckles.""
-Dorobo
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