Snip, Chop, and Clip!

After a number of reviews from fellow authors on the ABNA forum and Dorobo's Entry page, I've decided it's absolutely essential to further differentiate Thane's voice from Nitra's.  It's always been a concern of mine (how similar they sound) so I have taken to hard-copy editing until further notice (:  To check out the newest edits made to the excerpt take a peek at Dorobo's goodreads page!  https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/18492817-dorobo?from_search=true

 

Btw, now this is the kind of cover I think Dorobo should have: